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PostPosted: Wed Mar 26, 2008 1:18 am    Post subject: !Finished! - "Lingerie Thingerie 21" (mature conte Reply with quote

A new Lingerie Thingerie, whee! Razz

This is nothing like what I had in mind for this picture when I started making it, but even so, I quite like it. The scene behind is from the front of the mansion. Although there's parking space for cars in the opposite direction, the front is still mainly a grassy field, and there's no pavement or the like. (this is still easy to change if needed, but I'd like the whole mansion to be sorta surrounded by grass, except for maybe a few paths like those seen in LT13).

That's about all I had planned initially. The girl wasn't supposed to have glasses, or a see-thru top, or stockings, or brown hair. It just kinda happened to go that way while I kept adding stuff. sweat drop Though I have to say, her hair looks great in pretty much any colour I tried, so if another colour needs to be used, there's a lot of options to pick from. I rather liked purple and orange for her too. Green looks great but a bit out of place. Anyways.

She's the girl who usually greets newcomers and gives tours to visitors. I rather like to think of her as the mansion's guide altogether. At one point I was even thinking about linking her identity to the story of the mansion, which so far has been a monastery turned to special mansion by a business woman. I was thinking maybe this business woman could be her... or more believably, she could be the owner's daughter or cousin or whatever sounds good.

Oh, and that sorta golden/bronze figure on the front wall is supposed to be a figure of a nude girl holding arms up crossed above the head. Let me know if it's good or too confusing. I'll make something more simple if it's not recognizable enough. Additionally, above that figure would be the mansion's name, if it's been chosen by the time this gets finished (if it ever does. You people vote. Razz)

Architecture still needs a bit more detail, and the window is a bit too high and there should probably be more of 'em, and stuff like that.

But enough babble, here's the preview:


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PostPosted: Wed Mar 26, 2008 2:07 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I really like the everything about this pic.

Don't change anything at lest contentwise.

I never begrange an artist his/her twicking.
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 26, 2008 2:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Actually i have to agree, i love the boob size on this one, they look how you'd like them to look like xP
Can't really give any form of crit for this one in my eyes ._.' Nice one Hitty!
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 26, 2008 4:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

yeah actually this one is almost perfect. cant see nothing I would change.
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 26, 2008 10:06 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

The figure on the front wall is detailed enough to see the arms, fingers, and hair clearly so I think it's fine.

Her left breast looks a little more perky than the right one, not that I'm staring at her breasts, or staring at her. Okay, I'll shut up now.
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 28, 2008 4:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Good, and sexy. Nice golden thingy on the wall beside her, too!
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 28, 2008 8:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sheesh! It is like looking at myself through a mirror... Except that the image has more boobage, and red eyes instead of heterochromatic. Good Grief!
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 29, 2008 10:10 am    Post subject: Through the Looking-Glass, and What Sachiko Found There Reply with quote

Sachiko wrote:
Sheesh! It is like looking at myself through a mirror... Except that the image has more boobage, and red eyes instead of heterochromatic. Good Grief!
Oh wow, you're cute! Well, as far as three-dimensional girls go anyway. . .
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 29, 2008 4:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Beaaauuutiful, great boobs, maybe its a little weird the see trough tshirt thing since she already has some nice lingerie.
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 03, 2008 3:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

That's a T-shirt?
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 03, 2008 5:26 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

It's really more of a See Thru-Shirt. Razz
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PostPosted: Tue May 06, 2008 7:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm currently working on finishing this one. I'd say I'm about 80% done with the background, and 50% done with the character colouring.

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Now I'm at 95% with background (basically last adjustments) and 75% with the character (basically hair is uncoloured, and some lines). I'll try to finish this tomorrow. ^^
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PostPosted: Wed May 07, 2008 6:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yay! The only downside is she isn't based on a real-life model and it would be really nice to see a three-dimensional version of her. Very Happy
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PostPosted: Wed May 07, 2008 7:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

HitmanN wrote:
I'm currently working on finishing this one. I'd say I'm about 80% done with the background, and 50% done with the character colouring.

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Now I'm at 95% with background (basically last adjustments) and 75% with the character (basically hair is uncoloured, and some lines). I'll try to finish this tomorrow. ^^
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I am so glad to hear that you're finishing this one. Loving it!
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PostPosted: Wed May 07, 2008 7:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Here it is.

If anything strikes you as odd in it, be sure to mention (for example, how does the shadow she's casting on the front wall look? Good? Bad? Too big?) Otherwise this'll go into the galleries later today or tomorrow. ^^

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PostPosted: Wed May 07, 2008 7:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

the shadow looks fine. I just wonder if you really want that much shadow because as it stands it looks a bit dark. It looks like the light is coming from behind the viewer and I don't see anything blocking the light so it should look a little bit brighter imo sweat drop

great drawing though... now lets get to naming her/whatnot Ex-dee!
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PostPosted: Wed May 07, 2008 7:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ok then.. anyone else think the same about the darkness?

If yes, then I shall brighten things up. Razz

[Edit] Hmm, the shadows need a bit of adjusting in shape too. [/Edit]
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PostPosted: Wed May 07, 2008 7:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think the shadows are actually fine :3
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PostPosted: Wed May 07, 2008 7:52 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, here's an edition with about 10% less shading on the walls, slightly adjusted shadow shapes and couple of very tiny edits you probably might not even notice. Razz

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PostPosted: Wed May 07, 2008 11:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm not sure the angle of the shadow cast by the building is the same as the angle cast by the woman.

Also is the direction of the reflected light in agreement with the shadows? The shadows and the light shining on the pillars appear to have the same source, but not the light reflected on the window.

I only got a short break right now so I'm not 100% sure on the direction of the light & shadows.
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