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PostPosted: Fri Feb 15, 2008 8:15 pm    Post subject: !Finished! - "Lingerie Thingerie 19" (mature) Reply with quote

Aaaand another one. I was enthusiastic last night. x3

She's the girl in charge of cleaning the mansion today. For the sake of cuter appearance, she's got some frilly maid-like lingerie on her. ^^ She looks a bit like Erika, but I didn't want Erika to be a cleaner, so this girl looks slightly different.

I rather like this pic, though the background seems dull. I need some new ideas regarding the architecture, furniture and decorations. sweat drop

I think light purple or pink look cutest for her hair. Matching lingerie colour looks good too. Pigtails could use some ribbons or something.

Suggestions and ideas are welcome, I suppose. sweat drop



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PostPosted: Fri Feb 15, 2008 8:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Dude, I can tell you, from a mile away, what is wrong here.

It is something in the face, for some reason, I think the expression needs some working.
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 15, 2008 8:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hmm? @.o I thought that was one of the good parts of the pic.
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 15, 2008 8:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Don't mean me, I'm sick, my sight is a bit blurred.

Probably I was the one who made a mistake. But I'm pretty sure something needs a touch somewhere. A woman's intuition is never wrong.
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 15, 2008 8:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sachiko wrote:
Don't mean me, I'm sick, my sight is a bit blurred.

Probably I was the one who made a mistake. But I'm pretty sure something needs a touch somewhere. A woman's intuition is never wrong.


The only thing I feel needs adjusting is maybe the mouth position. And perhaps the shape of the nose a bit, but nothing major. @.o

Anyways, let's wait and see what others think. ^^
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 15, 2008 9:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

There seems to be something slightly off on her face but it's subtle. Something left side of the face vs the right. Eyes maybe? Nose and eyes? Can't tell right now, I'm sick too.

Other than that everything looks good and the colors work well together. I just need to ask her what shampoo she uses because I can never get my hair that shiny.
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 16, 2008 3:37 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

This may be my new favorite of the series, and that's one heck of a choice. I also really how the face turned out. Her head turned to the side, but her eyes towards the camera makes an interesting effect.
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 16, 2008 4:32 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think that again it was focused on the nose, people want them smaller i guess :3
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 16, 2008 8:01 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think it looks fantastic so far! I don't notice anything 'off' about her facial composition, maybe it's just me? Anyway, I think the hair colour is rather fitting for this character. Decorations might be nice to add for the pigtails like you've already mentioned - small ribbons or something. Otherwise, it's quite impressive!

Also, if you're running out of ideas for interior designs [furniture and whatnot] you might want to try browsing some home decor sites. It might make it easier to add variety to the backgrounds. :D
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 16, 2008 2:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I edited the face and hair a bit and added version 2 to the first post. The main difference is that the face doesn't look quite as turned to the side as in the original. Mostly due to moving eyes, nose and mouth a bit to the left. Also tweaked the chin, added ribbons to the pigtails, and did some misc hair adjustments. Any better now?

I'm starting to think that I should increase the head size for the final version a bit. It's a bit smaller than average head size on my characters. I want to keep the style as consistent as possible throughout the calendar. sweat drop

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Also, if you're running out of ideas for interior designs [furniture and whatnot] you might want to try browsing some home decor sites. It might make it easier to add variety to the backgrounds. Very Happy


I know. sweat drop Just some random Googling can do wonders actually.
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 16, 2008 3:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

HitmanN wrote:
I edited the face and hair a bit and added version 2 to the first post. The main difference is that the face doesn't look quite as turned to the side as in the original. Mostly due to moving eyes, nose and mouth a bit to the left. Also tweaked the chin, added ribbons to the pigtails, and did some misc hair adjustments. Any better now?

I'm starting to think that I should increase the head size for the final version a bit. It's a bit smaller than average head size on my characters. I want to keep the style as consistent as possible throughout the calendar. ^^;

Regen wrote:
Also, if you're running out of ideas for interior designs [furniture and whatnot] you might want to try browsing some home decor sites. It might make it easier to add variety to the backgrounds. :D


I know. ^^; Just some random Googling can do wonders actually.


I think it looks great! I can't imagine having to make any drastic changes for the final version; the second preview already looks more complete. ^____^
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 17, 2008 2:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Most of the changes you made I can't even tell but it makes a world of difference. Yay!

Looking at the whites of her eyes her left eye is looking at us and her right eye is looking striaght ahead. Why on earth am I getting that feeling from Version 2 and not Version 1?

Speaking of unusual houses, have you ever heard of Winchester Mystery House? There is no place quite like it.
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 17, 2008 3:11 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

MrNybbles wrote:
Looking at the whites of her eyes her left eye is looking at us and her right eye is looking striaght ahead. Why on earth am I getting that feeling from Version 2 and not Version 1?


I think I know what you mean, but it's really a matter of fine-tuning by a pixel or two to fix that. It's the different eye width/shape that's giving off the illusion, so to speak.

MrNybbles wrote:
Speaking of unusual houses, have you ever heard of Winchester Mystery House? There is no place quite like it.


That's one crazy building alright. Razz
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 17, 2008 8:49 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I've heard of that house. They are still adding and destroying rooms on it aren't they? And to think it started out as a small, couple room shack before the family bought it.
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 17, 2008 4:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Pretty nice! I like it!
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 20, 2008 1:37 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Fantastic! I was stunned when I saw it. I think the facial expression (as the others), needs a bit of work. Bit thinner nose?
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 27, 2008 1:46 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Both versions are gorgeous Ex-dee! Sigh there are too many beautiful pictures here I wish you could include a few more in the calendar >.<;

Ohh for the background, why don't you put someone else's shadow in there? It would certainly be different =)
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 27, 2008 2:29 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Naraku ni Yokoso wrote:

Ohh for the background, why don't you put someone else's shadow in there? It would certainly be different =)


An interesting idea, actually. It would help give the scene a more everyday feel when the surroundings have signs of other girls.

Worth keeping in mind, this idea. Smile
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 14, 2008 10:22 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

i really like this picture.

There's something oddly charming about how you do pubic hair.
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 03, 2008 4:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think I shall finish this one next.

Please discuss the hair colour in here:
http://www.hitmann.net/board/viewtopic.php?t=1467
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