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PostPosted: Mon Jan 28, 2008 4:16 am    Post subject: Preview - "Lingerie Thingerie 13" (mature content) Reply with quote

I'm on fire! Another Lingerie Thingerie candidate.

This time around though, I didn't bother colouring the pic. To be honest, I don't like this pic too much. The lingerie is kinda nice and all, but the pose is so plain. Also, some of the background (especially the flowerbed on the top right) is out of perspective. Actually the whole pose is slightly out of perspective. >< Lots of things need adjusting, but I don't think it's worth abandoning. I'll let you people decide. Afterall, if you vote for it in future polls, then I'll need to finish it.

Also, if this is ever voted to be finished, then I'll let you people choose some colours. Razz



[Editing notes to self:]
- Tweak the head shape a bit
- Balance issues? Shift the left-side hand more to the back
- Elbow of left arm shouldn't be as visible.
- Sachiko requests heterochromatic eye colours, blue and green. Worth considering. ^^


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PostPosted: Mon Jan 28, 2008 6:08 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I kinda let this peince, but that is becuase I like almost all of your work.

I do like the expression.
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 28, 2008 1:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

IMO you got some nice details on the lingerie, but the left arm (our view) seems a bit twisted ._.
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 28, 2008 3:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hean wrote:
IMO you got some nice details on the lingerie, but the left arm (our view) seems a bit twisted ._.


Hmm, I can't really tell.

Anyone else think the same? I'll put it on my to-do list if it seems like a common issue to notice.
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 28, 2008 7:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think that the arm is realistically posed, at least on its own.

Balance may be an issue.

Granted, of course, my main way of figuring this out is doing some part of the pose myself.
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 28, 2008 8:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

sawblade2323 wrote:

Balance may be an issue.


Hmm, true. Might have to shift the hand to the back a bit.
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 28, 2008 10:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Really like this one... but somethings not right with her arms... it seems unnatural... and the boobs are just a bit to large for the body...

but looks really nice... hope to see it coloured...
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 29, 2008 12:14 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Houdam wrote:
the boobs are just a bit to large for the body...


In my art that's usually an acceptable, or even desired thing. sweat drop
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 29, 2008 7:14 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

About the left arm... I'm not entirely certain, but I think the elbow joint looks a bit... off. In that position, the inside of the joint should be pointing out of the image and the outer part shouldn't be visible. I think...

Aside from that, I definitely think that this should be continued. It looks very nice.

I'll have to do some looking back for any ideas on color scheme, though.
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 29, 2008 2:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

entropiCCycles wrote:
About the left arm... I'm not entirely certain, but I think the elbow joint looks a bit... off. In that position, the inside of the joint should be pointing out of the image and the outer part shouldn't be visible. I think...


*holds arm in the same position* Hmm, I guess it wouldn't be quite as visible. I'll add it on my edit list. ^^
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 1:56 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think the position looks really awkward. You'd need to change this a lot for it to be good.
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 8:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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In my art that's usually an acceptable, or even desired thing. sweat drop


I know, and i feel just the same way. Love your work but on this one girl i just think they look kindda too big... somethings just not right. Smile
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 9:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

If you make her eyes heterochromatic, I will love you forever.

My bet is right one green, left one blue.
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 10:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

That's a request I might actually approve of. I wonder if I've ever coloured eyes with two different colours. ^^
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 10:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

*Hugs Hitmann*

And of course, the main colour of the pic should be related with gardening.

I think I speak in everyone's behalf when I say that green hair for her would not be a crazy idea...

And, the tits are just perfect. Large, but not as large as a head. Simply gorgeous. *^^*
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 11:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I really like Sachiko's ideas for this. Very Happy Especially the heterochromia suggestion.
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 11:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Seconded :3! Nice idea for the colour of the eyes!
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 11:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yeah, it's a nice idea with the eyes.

The green hair idea could work too. I imagine it being a dark shade.
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 11:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

QuantumToast wrote:
Yeah, it's a nice idea with the eyes.

The green hair idea could work too. I imagine it being a dark shade.

And then make the eyes more light? A bit like Yuna from Final Fantasy X? (Just with Green hair instead of light brown)
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 12:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I really like this one, it will probably get my vote for finishing. Other than that though, most of the things that could probably be improved have already been mentioned.
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