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PostPosted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 1:25 pm    Post subject: !Finished! - "Lingerie Thingerie 10" (mature conte Reply with quote

I SHOULD be working on a commission again, but I just couldn't resist drawin' a new lingerie thingerie. If I'm planning on drawing all twelve and finishing them for a calendar before the end of the year, then I need to make haste. @_@; Most likely it won't happen, due to all the other projects and commissions that I need to take care of... but anyways, it'll be my primary objective for now. (Whoa, dejŠ vu feeling) Ex-dee!

I quite like how this one has turned out so far. The legs and feet still need some work, and the piano is floating in air (though it's hard to tell that it has no legs). Also, there isn't anything interesting on the background (gotta have something there, at least a potted plant or something).

The lingerie part is rather simple too, and those huge ribbons are kinda crazy, so I'm open for additional ideas. ;P Some socks/stockings would compliment the feet, but I kinda like the toes on the piano keys combination. sweat drop

So, suggestions are welcome.



[Editing notes to self:]
- Foot on piano keys could be slightly smaller
- Remove one of the bows
- Add detail/decorations to the piano


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PostPosted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 2:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hmm... the eyes are larger than in the other lingerie thingerie pics. Might need to shrink them a bit too, to maintain some form of consistency. Razz
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 3:03 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

swap one of the bow or a garter belt. Or just have one bow in general. Two maybe over doing it. Hmmmm . . . . try one of those potted palms in the background. As much as I hate feet I agree the toes on the piano key is a good idea. It's cute. The top part of the chest above her boobs feels bare IMO.

Pose wise, her neck looks a little strained other then that nothing stands out to me as off.
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 3:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

All valid points. Though removing the other ribbon can really make the legs and feet area look empty. It kind of needs something there... or maybe the calendar could use one pic like that. I dunno. sweat drop

The area above her chest, as well as the neck will be refined. Potted palm is also a good idea. I tend to make other kinds of random plants, but never done a palm. Indeed. Worth considering. Wink

Thanksies for the feedback. ^^

I would still like to hear others' opinions too. Wink
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 6:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

...

REDHEADS! =D

*Coughs*

Aside from that, I think the eyes are fine. I agree with Feena's 'one bow to rule them all' idea. *Not taken word for word* X3

Aside from that, I love it.

Side note though, what do you call those glove-type thingies she's wearing? o_o

I'm sure I've seen them being named before, but I can't for the life of me remember. Shifty Eyes ©Steveman
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 6:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Milanor wrote:

Side note though, what do you call those glove-type thingies she's wearing? o_o

I'm sure I've seen them being named before, but I can't for the life of me remember. Shifty Eyes ©Steveman


... umm... they're...

Gloves?

Laughing
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 6:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

HitmanN wrote:
Milanor wrote:

Side note though, what do you call those glove-type thingies she's wearing? o_o

I'm sure I've seen them being named before, but I can't for the life of me remember. Shifty Eyes ©Steveman


... umm... they're...

Gloves?

Laughing


Well, how helpful. =3

Eh, never mind, I can vaguely remember them having a name, although my mind may just be messing with me again. o_o;
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 6:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

By the way... if I'm gonna remove one of the bows... which one should it be? Razz
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 6:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I vote for the one in the foreground, or the left leg. Whichever you want to call it.
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 7:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

FeenaFlame wrote:
swap one of the bow or a garter belt. Or just have one bow in general. Two maybe over doing it. Hmmmm . . . . try one of those potted palms in the background. As much as I hate feet I agree the toes on the piano key is a good idea. It's cute. The top part of the chest above her boobs feels bare IMO.

Pose wise, her neck looks a little strained other then that nothing stands out to me as off.


sweat drop I feel like I disagree with almost everything that you said, Feena... I'm sorry, I'm not trying to be mean. Please don't kill me! Sad

I also agree that the toes on the keys is a good idea. As for the top part of her body being bare, how about adding a choker/collar? Or maybe move one of the ribbons to around the neck? Laughing

As for the background plant... I'm not sure if plants fit very well with a piano. sweat drop Maybe add some sort of candelabra?

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I vote for the one in the foreground, or the left leg. Whichever you want to call it.


Honestly, I think that it would be better with the bow on the left and not on the right, if you were to go with only one bow. Honestly, I wouldn't mind two bows in this image. sweat drop


But, overall, I don't mind the original, either. sweat drop
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 10:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

entropiCCycles wrote:

As for the background plant... I'm not sure if plants fit very well with a piano. sweat drop Maybe add some sort of candelabra?


Plant or two on the background would help lift up the girl and the piano on the foreground. Red hair would look much better against other than plain red background. Wink

The candelabra wouldn't be too bad either, but there already is a light source on the right, so I dunno if they would serve any purpose there... other than as decorative stuff. sweat drop
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 12:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, I happen to be listening to Piano Man at this very moment, so I am connecting the piano to a bar or a club, or at least to hardwood surfaces. None of those seem to lend themselves to the limited space for the background, so my vote goes for the palm.

As for the clothing, I think moving one of the bows from the upper leg to the lower might work as a solution. As for the chest / neck, I like the uncluttered look and advocate leaving it as is.


As a last bit of minutia, the piano seems rather bare. There is no decoration, no real character, or even a place to put sheet music. I realize that it is just a pedestal for the girl and that the sheet music rack would simply obstruct the view of her, but pianos are such elegant things, it seems a shame to leave it so simple.
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 4:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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The candelabra wouldn't be too bad either, but there already is a light source on the right, so I dunno if they would serve any purpose there... other than as decorative stuff. sweat drop


Well, just a suggestion. sweat drop But, then again, I never said that the candelabra had to be lit up. Wink
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 6:04 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

HitmanN wrote:
Milanor wrote:

Side note though, what do you call those glove-type thingies she's wearing? o_o

I'm sure I've seen them being named before, but I can't for the life of me remember. Shifty Eyes ©Steveman


... umm... they're...

Gloves?

Laughing


Arm warmers or long cuffs. They are now common place fashion actually.
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 12, 2007 8:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh man xP, how did I missed to comment this? Anyway, nice as always. And my idea for the pond xP. Some trinket around the neck would be nice. Or perhaps a tiiiiiny tatooo xP. More skin stays revealed that way Ex-dee!
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 18, 2007 6:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I really like her. ^__^
I love the hair and the eyes and the face.
The lingere is simple, but very nicely done.
The bows are still cute. : -p
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 24, 2007 11:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Milanor wrote:
HitmanN wrote:
Milanor wrote:

Side note though, what do you call those glove-type thingies she's wearing? o_o

I'm sure I've seen them being named before, but I can't for the life of me remember. Shifty Eyes ©Steveman


... umm... they're...

Gloves?

Laughing


Well, how helpful. =3

Eh, never mind, I can vaguely remember them having a name, although my mind may just be messing with me again. o_o;


Actually, I think they're called arm socks. there;s a girl in my class that wears everyday.
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 4:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Astral wrote:
Milanor wrote:
HitmanN wrote:
Milanor wrote:

Side note though, what do you call those glove-type thingies she's wearing? o_o

I'm sure I've seen them being named before, but I can't for the life of me remember. Shifty Eyes ©Steveman


... umm... they're...

Gloves?

Laughing


Well, how helpful. =3

Eh, never mind, I can vaguely remember them having a name, although my mind may just be messing with me again. o_o;


Actually, I think they're called arm socks. there;s a girl in my class that wears everyday.


I thought that they were called armwarmers. o.O
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 21, 2007 2:02 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Bummer about the background. I rather like the combo of hair to rest of girl, rest of girl to background. but the hair to background doesn't look so swell.
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 29, 2007 5:38 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wow... Red Hair + Very Sexy x Piano = Instant favorite and/or explosion! This is easily one of my favorites from you ever, extremely well drawn. I especially love her deep blue eyes, very... passionate? I dunno, but I like them anyways. I kinda have contrasting feelings about her gloves color though... I like how it matches her headband, but I think the dark red and light purple contrast a little bit. Also, if I had to remove a ribbon, I'd go for the one on the left leg.
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