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PostPosted: Fri Feb 20, 2009 5:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

In the original, the eyes aren't quite aligned right with the head itself, and the back side (her left side) of the face seems to be a bit, err... how should I say it, more extended to front than the angle would suggest. At least that's the feeling I got after I looked at it after the critique I got.

Dunno if the critiquer likes the changes, but I think it's better in version 2.
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 5:03 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yum. That is all.
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 5:20 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hey there, I'm the dA "critiquer". Wink
I think version 2 does look a little better, but it's a tough call. Looking at both versions side by side, there's things I like about version 1 that look off in version 2 to me. Sorry, I'm not trying to give you a hard time--my critique of v1 was just what I thought looked a little strange.
Either one will look great IMO. And as you said in your reply to me, you're probably right about coloring smoothing the form out a bit.
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 1:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

TomServo1 wrote:
Looking at both versions side by side, there's things I like about version 1 that look off in version 2 to me. Sorry, I'm not trying to give you a hard time--my critique of v1 was just what I thought looked a little strange.


Feel free to be more specific. I'm not yet sure when I'll be colouring these, so until then I might just as well try to improve them a bit. Wink
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 11:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, I think her left shoulder looks a little "tense" in v2. I think it should be lowered a tiny bit.
I also slightly prefer the way the legs looked in v1. Maybe that's just me, though.
And, now you know why I can't teach myself to draw. Laughing
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 27, 2009 1:04 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

The shoulder may indeed need a little bit more editing. I'll look into it next time I edit the pic.
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 03, 2009 10:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wow, cool character. Haven't been here in a long time ^_^

And I don't know if it helps or not, but oh well.

Age: I was thinking around 18/19. She seems a lot younger then your other characters.
Eye Colour: Blue.

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 04, 2009 4:10 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ummm, yeah... no progress on this photoshoot thing for now. Too much other stuff to work on. I'll get back to it sooner or later, I hope. @,o;
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 17, 2009 11:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

really like pic number 5.

Not quite sure why.
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PostPosted: Wed May 06, 2009 1:52 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I love it. Loving it!
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 07, 2010 4:07 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I like it, I think there should be one where she is smearing her ice cream on her nipples.
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 07, 2010 6:00 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

private bob4 wrote:
I like it, I think there should be one where she is smearing her ice cream on her nipples.


Would be cute but I doubt it would fit her personality. Sounds more like a MiSha thing to me.
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 07, 2010 7:21 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Jaxton Dragoon wrote:
private bob4 wrote:
I like it, I think there should be one where she is smearing her ice cream on her nipples.


Would be cute but I doubt it would fit her personality. Sounds more like a MiSha thing to me.
Wouldn't that be a waste of perfectly good ice cream?
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 07, 2010 3:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

MrNybbles wrote:
Jaxton Dragoon wrote:
private bob4 wrote:
I like it, I think there should be one where she is smearing her ice cream on her nipples.


Would be cute but I doubt it would fit her personality. Sounds more like a MiSha thing to me.
Wouldn't that be a waste of perfectly good ice cream?


I don't think MiSha would be opposed to letting someone help her clean it up.
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 07, 2010 5:30 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Lots of wandering thoughts around here lately.
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 08, 2010 8:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

HitmanN wrote:
Lots of wandering thoughts around here lately.
Do MiSha and Erica have a last name?
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 08, 2010 9:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Never really decided on one. sweat drop
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 08, 2010 10:54 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

HitmanN wrote:
Never really decided on one. sweat drop


Long name Smile
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