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PostPosted: Sun Feb 10, 2008 1:00 am    Post subject: Preview - "Lingerie Thingerie 17" (mature content) Reply with quote

Here's another Lingerie Thingerie candidate. Didn't really come out as I had originally planned. I think I wanted larger boobs for her. The hand on the window sill is kinda odd too, I'll need to work on that. The hairstyle is a bit more unusual, but also kinda dull. Colour theme is obviously supposed to be orange. Walls could use some texture too. Other than that, I rather like it though. ^^

As usual, suggestions are welcome, and will be considered for the final version, in case it's voted to be included in the calendar.

[Edit] Hmm... the thighs aren't exactly same size. Might need to adjust one of 'em. [/Edit]

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 10, 2008 5:25 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hmm....I would say make the boobs a littll bit bigger and everything will be a-ok! =)
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 10, 2008 7:00 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I actually like the boobs the way they are. IMO, all she needs is the attention to her thighs that Hit-kun pointed out.
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 10, 2008 10:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Looking at the bottom edges of where the windows meet the window pane and the gap between them don't seem to match. The bottom edges should look more open for a gap that wide. I agree with Steveman on her breast size.
I like the hair and her girl-next-door look.
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 10, 2008 2:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

2-1 for leaving the boobs as they are. I guess I'll keep 'em that way then. Very Happy Well, 2-2 if my plans count. Ex-dee! More opinions needed! Wink

MrNybbles wrote:
Looking at the bottom edges of where the windows meet the window pane and the gap between them don't seem to match.


I was hoping no one would notice. Razz

Anyways, the main mistake is in the colouring. The window pane/border you see a hint of from behind the left side of the archway is actually wall. I just accidentally coloured it wrong. xP The window sill platform also need a very slight adjustment at the lower left corner. Should bring it out a bit.
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 10, 2008 7:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I have always wondered this....

Does a sunset really bring out a gril's sexiness? Ex-dee!

I see nothing wrong with the picture...And it feels like I am right there...
hmm....
Cryin' I want to be there! Ex-dee!
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 14, 2008 4:43 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I like her tits and face, and the hair style. Really good
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 20, 2008 1:38 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I like the post and the lingerie, but I think the hips needa be a bit wider. Otherwise, good job!
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 10, 2008 12:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

quamp wrote:
It's a very nice picture. I love the detail on the bustier, it's very lavish.
In addition to the above, It looks like her fingers don't have fingernails on them. Also the hair's shadow doesn't look like it matches her hair exactly. There's a small strand in the middle that isn't represented in the shadow. Also on the left hand, if she has fingernails, they're digging into the sill there.


I hardly ever draw fingernails for preview versions, unless it's a close-up shot, so you're gonna have a lot of feedback to give in future as well. Laughing

If you mean the shadow on the wall, take into account the direction of the light source and her positioning. If the small strand was represented in the same length in the the shadow as it is on her, she'd have to be facing towards the light source.

And she does have fingernails, but who's to say they're long nails. Wink But that aside, the fingers/hand need a slight repositioning, true.
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